Tag: flash fiction

Pizza in a Box

I’m afraid my recording this time is a bit on the weird side, sound-wise. It’s allergy season, my grandson loves to play outside (as does his grandmother), and this one seems especially virulent. Here’s my Carrot Ranch Literary Community 99-word story.

Pizza came to Nebraska in the early 60s. It arrived in a box. Back then, a pizza party did not involve take out or delivery, or even popping a frozen treat in the oven. We mixed the dough, according to directions, inhaling the yeasty aroma. We tried tossing it on our fingers, then we gathered up the mess and pressed it into a pan, crimped the edges and spread the tomato sauce around. Then we scattered cheese over the top. Sometimes I make pizza, but not the bare bones concoctions we giggled over. Nor is it as much fun.

This was our box of choice.

Tropical Revolution

This bit of flash fiction, or more like essay, is a result of this week’s Carrot Ranch Literary Community blog prompt: key lime pie. It’s funny the kinds of associations one makes, isn’t it?

Key lime pie tastes of freedom in tropical paradise.  

The lime, a citrus hybrid, grows in places like the Florid Keys and the islands of the Caribbean, reminding me of Ernest Hemingway, tucked away in the Keys, writing of the Spanish Civil War, Fidel and Raul Castro, and Che Guevara overthrowing the Batista regime in Cuba. Farther back in time—probably before agronomists developed key limes—the blacks in Haiti rose up in a slave rebellion that freed Haiti from French colonial rule and abolished slavery there.

Do you suppose any of those revolutionaries celebrated with key lime pie?

Can’t you see Hemingway lounging on beach with a mojito?

Scale

I’ve got a couple of story ideas for when I finish revising the last novel of my trilogy—the second is due to release the first week in November. One’s about a woman who drives a truck (semi-tractor/trailer coast to coast) and another about a woman who checks herself in to an inpatient mental institution to escape a brutal husband. I’ve written short stories about both. But as I age, this woman tugs harder and harder on my thoughts.

So here’s how I’m meeting this week’s GirlieOnTheEdge blog challenge prompt. The word is scale.

She stepped on the scale and groaned—she’d just checked the zero balance and knew it was accurate.

When did her body go to hell?

She’d never needed to diet and she got plenty of exercise in her job—the camping, swimming, and canoeing didn’t hurt either. But then sometime in her late fifties and early sixties, her metabolism changed and it seemed like she could look at a dish of ice cream and gain a pound. Not spectacular, but annoyingly inexorable, the weight gain joined a host of aging signs, all of them familiar—graying hair, thin skin (there really is such a thing), stiff joints—she felt vaguely depressed.

But the symptom that really fried her bacon was the way people called her honey or patiently explained stuff she already knew rather than answering her question—and ignored any idea she presented as if she weren’t even in the room.

I Double Dog Dare You

This week for the Carrot Ranch Literary Community flash fiction challenge, we were to write something about the safe cracker’s daughter. I thought for a while about the stereotypical safe cracker, then I wondered what would happen with a little gender bending and maybe a dare instead of a crime. So here’s my contribution.

I was thirteen when Mom went to prison for cracking a safe. I’m actually pretty proud of her because she never took anything. It was just a dare.

She’d been raggin’ on my dad for not giving her jewelry—like her friends got.

“I ain’t got that kind of dough,” Pop said, “so when you rob a bank, I’ll get your diamonds.”

We knew she had the skills and what she didn’t know, she’d learn. But it was just idle conversation.

“Maybe I will.”

“I double dog dare you,” Dad said. “You ain’t got the nerve.”

But she did.

Countdown

This is my Six-Sentence Thursday contribution to the GirlieOnTheEdge blog. Sometimes I use these tiny flash-fiction prompts to see how far I can condense a piece of writing without losing the meaning of the story.

This one is truly worthy of a howl. Fortunately, Harold did not blow the house down, although he displaced a small portion of the foundation.

We were starting high school and I was thrashing through cobwebs in my nerdy friend Harold’s basement so I could watch his latest experiment. He had me hunker down behind a bunch of dusty old boxes while he struck a match and lit a fuse hanging out of the foundation.

“What are you doing?” I howled.

“Ten,” he said.

“Come on, Harold, you’ve set your little experiment under the sill plate of your own house.”

He finished his countdown, smoke poured out of the little hole in the foundation, I ducked behind the boxes just before I heard an explosion and a spattering of stuff, and Harold jumped up and yelled, “It worked! It worked!”

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Drive

This is another of my six-sentence flash-fiction contributions.

I was never a bullhauler, but this is the only image I’ve got.
  1. I make my living in a bubble.
  2. Behind a tough sheet of Plexiglas I watch fathers in New Jersey going to work before dawn, families vacationing in Arizona, mothers loading groceries in Chicago.
  3. I drive a big truck—garment loads from New York and produce from California, back and forth from coast to coast.
  4. The first time I saw an elephant blocking the road, I pulled over and sloshed through the roadside trees in the rain, trying to figure out where it had gone when I looked away.
  5. When it appeared for the third time, I realized I had issues I had to resolve.
  6. Dispatch threatened to reassigned my lovely truck when I decided to take some leave, but it was my life and I needed to sort it out.

Perched on the Highest Hill

  1. Billy Arnold wanted to see whatever marauders, land grabbers, and horse thieves came to his neighborhood before they arrived, so he perched on top of the highest hill he could find, building his soddy right at its peak.
  2. He could see ten miles in any direction from his hill, including his three brothers’ and his dad’s homes.
  3. He felt safe.
  4. Day by day, wind ripped at his clothes, filled his eyes with dust, and dried out his crops, but still he prospered.
  5. His wife couldn’t wait for a real, frame house and Billy wanted corrals and barns and granaries—so he borrowed money.
  6. Instead of land grabbers, he lost his place to bankers, BUT he homesteaded a new place in Oklahoma and struck oil.

Sea Mist

The waves looked soft as he peered through tropical rain. The island was only a ragged outline. Crawling down the rope netting into a landing craft, he watched it grow closer, more distinct. It would be his first combat. Would he stand up to it? Was he brave as he thought—hoped?  Somehow he knew he would survive, but what about the others? Weeks earlier, in the middle of the ocean, he’d looked through a light mist silvered by soft by moonlight and realized survival wasn’t enough.  Seeing the guy next to him fall—that’s what made him sick.

What’s in the Trunk?

This is another of those six sentence challenges. The prompt word for this week is trunk.

Sometimes these old steamer trunks sat in people’s bedrooms, never used for travel, but for storing the most precious items.
  1. She died in February.
  2. Sometime later, we opened her steamer trunk.
  3. We found silk flowers, her favorite scent, her ruffled organdy dresses, a dental mold, and a detective’s license.
  4. Mom said she fell in love with a dentist who disappeared one day.
  5. She got her detective’s training and set out to find him—she did.
  6. He was married.

Landing Strip

I flew one of these for a while. In the face of climate change, can’t justify putzing around in the sky for fun.
This is another six-sentence blog challenge. The prompt word was strip.

1. Sometimes they call them runways, but those little grass strips around the countryside are just that—landing strips.

2. Imagine coming into one of them at night with minimal runway lights.

3. You’ve been watching the aura of a city far to your left and yard lights on scattered farms along the way.

4. Moonlight silvers the grasslands in between and stars are brighter up here.

5. Far away to your south heat lightning flashes along the horizon.

6. But you’re heading for that bumpy grass strip
that you can just now see–three miles from home