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Scale

I’ve got a couple of story ideas for when I finish revising the last novel of my trilogy—the second is due to release the first week in November. One’s about a woman who drives a truck (semi-tractor/trailer coast to coast) and another about a woman who checks herself in to an inpatient mental institution to escape a brutal husband. I’ve written short stories about both. But as I age, this woman tugs harder and harder on my thoughts.

So here’s how I’m meeting this week’s GirlieOnTheEdge blog challenge prompt. The word is scale.

She stepped on the scale and groaned—she’d just checked the zero balance and knew it was accurate.

When did her body go to hell?

She’d never needed to diet and she got plenty of exercise in her job—the camping, swimming, and canoeing didn’t hurt either. But then sometime in her late fifties and early sixties, her metabolism changed and it seemed like she could look at a dish of ice cream and gain a pound. Not spectacular, but annoyingly inexorable, the weight gain joined a host of aging signs, all of them familiar—graying hair, thin skin (there really is such a thing), stiff joints—she felt vaguely depressed.

But the symptom that really fried her bacon was the way people called her honey or patiently explained stuff she already knew rather than answering her question—and ignored any idea she presented as if she weren’t even in the room.

Code Blue

This is a six-sentence challenge story in response to the GirlieOnTheEdge blog. The prompt word is code and you should go see how others have met the challenge. In this context, to be coded is to be resuscitated when your heart stops.

She’s somebody’s grandmother and he visits every day. Mostly she knows him, but sometimes she calls him by his grandfather’s name. He smiles and shows me the pictures, side by side, one blond and one dark. “I don’t mind,” he says. “We look just alike and she loves us both.

 “I’ll miss her,” he says, “but she doesn’t want to be coded—says there’s nobody left knows what she knows. She attended all their funerals.”

Perpetual Motion

I guess last summer’s wildfires, this spring’s floods, miscellaneous hurricanes and tornadoes, and finally mass shootings, not to mention the anniversaries of Hiroshima and Nagasaki, finally got to me. This one’s a dark response to a Six-Second Challenge posted by Denise on her GirlieOnTheEdge blog. The prompt this time is Fare. Maybe you’ll want to try something cheerier.

I’ve got my fare and just a trifle to spare,“ but this is no Chattanooga Choo Choo? I’ve paid through the end of the line, across the continent to the end of a world crunched off into the Pacific. I can barely see through the filthy train window but it doesn’t matter; there’s nothing to see. I didn’t even see them bury my family, didn’t know they were gone until two weeks after the funeral—all done while machines breathed for me. Too slow, I tried to cover them with my body. Now I have no home; no place to stop; nobody left; just endless motion.

Landing Strip

I flew one of these for a while. In the face of climate change, can’t justify putzing around in the sky for fun.
This is another six-sentence blog challenge. The prompt word was strip.

1. Sometimes they call them runways, but those little grass strips around the countryside are just that—landing strips.

2. Imagine coming into one of them at night with minimal runway lights.

3. You’ve been watching the aura of a city far to your left and yard lights on scattered farms along the way.

4. Moonlight silvers the grasslands in between and stars are brighter up here.

5. Far away to your south heat lightning flashes along the horizon.

6. But you’re heading for that bumpy grass strip
that you can just now see–three miles from home