Category: Fiction

Some families do a better job of thriving in difficult circumstances and I’ve wanted to imagine through stories how they do it. I’ve selected my parents’ generation as a “lab” to consider surviving tough times. I hope I can discover coping mechanisms that transcend time.

Herding Sheep

This post resulted from another GirlieOnTheEdge six-sentence, flash-fiction challenge. The challenge word this time was pad and the first thing that came to mind was a happy, smiling dog padding around. You can check out the challenge, maybe write your own six sentences, here.

1. Freckles crept, nose near the ground, rump high, legs ready in case she needed to sprint, eyes riveted on an old ewe. 2. The ewe stomped once, twice, and looked over her shoulder. 3. The rest of the flock stood motionless behind her, watching. 4. Freckles crept another few inches and the ewe raised her head, turned, and dashed through middle of the flock, into the gate. 5. The rest of the sheep scurried in behind her. 6. Freckles padded over to her shepherd, smiling, head high, tail wagging, for a gentle pat on the head—job well done. Check this pinterest image: https://pin.it/zbfmzju4d4g2p4  Or here is an audio file.

Drive

This is another of my six-sentence flash-fiction contributions.

I was never a bullhauler, but this is the only image I’ve got.
  1. I make my living in a bubble.
  2. Behind a tough sheet of Plexiglas I watch fathers in New Jersey going to work before dawn, families vacationing in Arizona, mothers loading groceries in Chicago.
  3. I drive a big truck—garment loads from New York and produce from California, back and forth from coast to coast.
  4. The first time I saw an elephant blocking the road, I pulled over and sloshed through the roadside trees in the rain, trying to figure out where it had gone when I looked away.
  5. When it appeared for the third time, I realized I had issues I had to resolve.
  6. Dispatch threatened to reassigned my lovely truck when I decided to take some leave, but it was my life and I needed to sort it out.

A quote from one of my favorites

I love Pat Conroy for many things, but one of the most important is his description of his native South Carolina country. Here’s a sentence from Beach Music that makes me shiver: Because even beauty has its limits, I shall always remain a prisoner of war to this fragrant, voluptuous latitude of the planet, fringed with palms and green marshes running beside rivers for thirty miles at a time, and emptying out on low-lying archipelagoes running north and south along the coast before the Atlantic’s grand appearance.

Or how about this one: As we looked out to the sea a wind lifted off the crests of the incoming waves creating a dialogue between the palms and bearing an iodine taste.

Or this description of a resident: Her senses blazed like five Lenten candles when she stared out into that portion of the ocean that extended beyond their land.

Perched on the Highest Hill

  1. Billy Arnold wanted to see whatever marauders, land grabbers, and horse thieves came to his neighborhood before they arrived, so he perched on top of the highest hill he could find, building his soddy right at its peak.
  2. He could see ten miles in any direction from his hill, including his three brothers’ and his dad’s homes.
  3. He felt safe.
  4. Day by day, wind ripped at his clothes, filled his eyes with dust, and dried out his crops, but still he prospered.
  5. His wife couldn’t wait for a real, frame house and Billy wanted corrals and barns and granaries—so he borrowed money.
  6. Instead of land grabbers, he lost his place to bankers, BUT he homesteaded a new place in Oklahoma and struck oil.

Sea Mist

The waves looked soft as he peered through tropical rain. The island was only a ragged outline. Crawling down the rope netting into a landing craft, he watched it grow closer, more distinct. It would be his first combat. Would he stand up to it? Was he brave as he thought—hoped?  Somehow he knew he would survive, but what about the others? Weeks earlier, in the middle of the ocean, he’d looked through a light mist silvered by soft by moonlight and realized survival wasn’t enough.  Seeing the guy next to him fall—that’s what made him sick.

What’s in the Trunk?

This is another of those six sentence challenges. The prompt word for this week is trunk.

Sometimes these old steamer trunks sat in people’s bedrooms, never used for travel, but for storing the most precious items.
  1. She died in February.
  2. Sometime later, we opened her steamer trunk.
  3. We found silk flowers, her favorite scent, her ruffled organdy dresses, a dental mold, and a detective’s license.
  4. Mom said she fell in love with a dentist who disappeared one day.
  5. She got her detective’s training and set out to find him—she did.
  6. He was married.

Shards

If we only knew the stories that lived in these old houses.

Entering the abandoned house, we tiptoed on shards of glass. The windows must have shattered long ago; the oak floors were  badly warped. We smelled damp wood, wet wallpaper paste, molding plaster. This house once sheltered a family—our great grandparents and their ten children.

We couldn’t see shards of the lives lived there, the storms that destroyed a year’s income, the recession that nearly ruined the family, the trauma that resulted in hitting and punching.

Yet out of the love that survived in the house came this clan of descendants—the doctor, the lawyer, the merchant, the chief.

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Landing Strip

I flew one of these for a while. In the face of climate change, can’t justify putzing around in the sky for fun.
This is another six-sentence blog challenge. The prompt word was strip.

1. Sometimes they call them runways, but those little grass strips around the countryside are just that—landing strips.

2. Imagine coming into one of them at night with minimal runway lights.

3. You’ve been watching the aura of a city far to your left and yard lights on scattered farms along the way.

4. Moonlight silvers the grasslands in between and stars are brighter up here.

5. Far away to your south heat lightning flashes along the horizon.

6. But you’re heading for that bumpy grass strip
that you can just now see–three miles from home

Aida

You’ve created a list of New Year’s resolutions for the coming year. They are helpful, practical, and attainable.  You are certain that you can finish them all rather quickly, but every time you try to tackle one, you hear a sweet little voice.

“You don’t have to do this.”

“I don’t have to do what? What does that mean?”

You look around. There’s no one there, just a disembodied voice.

A couple of days later, you’re at your kitchen table, checking the employment ads. You’re looking for a new retail job. Maybe you can move up to management.

“You don’t have to do this.”

“Where the hell are you? What do you want?” You search your house. There’s no one there.

You shrug and go on about your business. A week later, you’re boxing up all the soft drinks in your fridge, the hostess twinkies, and candy bars. You have to think before you add the chocolate. You grimace, but you’re going to lose ten pounds by taking the sweets out of your diet.

“You don’t have to do this.”

“Do what, dammit? Who are you?” You dump the box in your dumpster—with emphasis.

You’re on your way to the fitness center, gym clothes packed in your bag. On the way to the car, you get the voice. You’re outside next to your car. There’s nowhere to hide, not a tree or a bush. Your patience is shot.

“What in the bloody hell do you want?”

You hear a chuckle. “Get real.”

“Get real?”

“Ten pounds?”

You’re still looking around for the voice. “It’s a place to start.”

“You can do better than that.”

“How much do you think I need to lose?” You open the passenger door and sit in the car, peering under the dash and into the back seat.

“I don’t think you need to lose weight.”

“What?”

“Is that the best you can do? Lost weight, exercise, change dead-end jobs. Is that all you want to do with your life??

“What’s wrong with that?”

“Nothing if that’s all you want.”

“What should I want?”

“Beats me. You want to spend your life selling stuff?”

“What’s wrong with selling stuff?”

“I remember when you wanted to sing Aida. What’s stopping you?”

“What’s stopping me? Do you have any idea how hard it is to get into opera?”

“No. But you do. You want a New Year’s Resolution? Let’s get started.“

“What if I fail?”

“What if you don’t try?”

The Girl in the Attic

 

“Somebody ought to clean out that attic,” Mom said.

“Yeah,” I agreed. I was lying on the couch texting my best friend.

You ought to clean out the attic.”

“Wait a minute. Me? How’d this get from somebody to me?”

“You’re somebody.”

“How about John? He’s somebody.”

“Go clean out the attic.”

I stomped upstairs and pulled down the ladder. When I poked my head through the floor, I found what I expected. A faceful of cobwebs.”

“Argh.”

I crawled back down and got the broom, sweeping wildly at the ceiling and the floor and everything in between. When I had most of the webs down, I looked around.

“Hey Mom! How long’s this stuff been up here?”

She came to the ladder. “I don’t know. Most of it’s from when we remodeled.”

“You don’t expect me to drag this furniture down, do you.”

“No. Just the junk. Vacuum up the dust.”

“What for?”

“I’m gonna make a little get away up there.”

“Little getaway,” I muttere4d. “What’s she need to get away from?”

I stood next to the one ceiling light and scanned the space. I actually remembered most of the old furniture and knick knacks. Over in one dark corner, though, I saw some really old stuff.

“Hey Mom. Where’d this old stuff come from?”

She came to the ladder again. “We didn’t build this place,” she said. “There was some stuff up there when we moved in.”

“And you didn’t even look at it?”

“Nope.”

The old stuff looked more interesting than our old furniture. I turned on my headlamp and headed over there. The furniture looked really old. Maybe we could sell antiques. I swished the dust rag over an old dressing table. When I opened the drawer, I found a dusty, old, leather diary. The lock had rusted through and I opened the book, sneezing until I’d raised a dust cloud.

Careful not to disturb any more dust, I turned to the first page. The date at the top made my eyes pop. October 31, 1868. Wow! I knew my family had owned this house for a long time. this was my great-great-great grandmother Sarah’s diary. She’d written her name in the middle of the page. Sarah Jane Green.

She wrote about watching the workmen lay the limestone foundation. She’s peered at some of the stones and noticed some ancient creature’s imprints. She wrote about watching them level the stones and nail together the walls. She admired the big muscled men who had set the walls on the foundation and nailed the corners together.

I grazed through the diary, absorbing my family stories. Sarah was a young bride when they built the house and she couldn’t wait to move in. In time there were crops and gardens and babies. She had an even dozen, but lost two to scarlet fever. She wrote about burying the tiny coffins and choosing the little stones with the lambs. Her husband lost his arm when a horse reared and trampled him. She wrote about burying the arm under an unfinished granite slab and her husband’s struggle to keep up with the farm work. It was a good thing they had sons.

Near the end of her life, she lived alone in this house. She started noticing things that moved mysteriously. At first she just thought she’d moved them and forgot, but before long she couldn’t deny that something strange was happening. She began hearing footsteps on the stairs at night. One afternoon, she’d been cleaning in her bedroom when she heard the ladder come down and footsteps in the attic.

She decided broad daylight was a great time to confront a ghost. She lit a kerosene lantern and climbed the ladder she’d been sure had been nestled up in the second floor ceiling. She poked her head into the attic. In the far corner she saw her ghost. She described the young female spook in detail. The clothing fascinated her. She was scandalized by the ghost’s short pants and “I can’t believe that woman’s wearing a man’s undershirt. Where would she buy such a thing?”

She described green eyes and hair that looked like a horse tail. “I wonder if she has any idea how to put her hair up. She remarked that the woman wore a silver barrette just like the one she’d lost that winter they’d had so much corn. Snow was coming. Even she helped shuck it and throw it into the crib.

I glanced down at my clothes. A red tank top and shorts. In the faded mirror over the dresser I noticed my ponytail was held by an antique silver barrette I’d found in the corner of the corn crib when we dug out all the layers of dirt. Mom said I could have it, so I’d cleaned it up and polished the tarnish.

This was weird. Did Sarah really see me? Had I fallen into some kind of time warp? How did great-great-great-granny see me more than 100 years ago? I glanced across the attic and there she was, just as real and substantial as I was—just dressed weird.

“You’re a ghost,” she said. she threw her arm up when I looked at her. My headlamp must have blinded her. “What is that light? Are you an angel.

I turned off the light. “No just a regular girl.”

“You don’t look regular.”

“You’re the ghost, Grandma. It’s the year 2018.”

She gasped.

“I think I’m your great-great-great-granddaughter.”

We talked for half an hour. “I have to go.” she said suddenly. She stepped through the hole in the floor onto the ladder. when I looked down after her, she was gone.